Friday, December 2, 2011

Slogan????

ok well in grammar we made a made-up invention. it is called Keyguard 4000. it is a automatic locker opener. all you have to do is put your thumb on it and it opens to your thumb print.





here are osme things about it:


1. 2 year warraty


2. removable


3. easy to install


4. variety of colors (blue, green,pink,purple)


5.easy activiation


6. anti-theft protection


7. affordable








a. we are trying to appeal this item to 4th-12th graders with lockers.





b. the size is 4" x 6"





c. it cost $17.95 plus tax





d. 5 second respond.





e. made from recycled metal and computer parts








* ok now that i described it i need to make a slogan that uses one slogan technique and one persuasive technique.





Slogan technigues:


1. rhyme


2. repetition


3. alliteration





persuasive techniques:


1. bandwagon


2. testimonial


3. emotional appeals


4. "plain folks"


5. snob appeal








ok i cant think of a slogan....help?|||Keyguard 4000,the only locker to go thumbs up for.|||something about access like " accessing easier access" (alliteration)





"think thumbs!" or "think thumbs up!" (alliteration)\


"with keyguard, it's not hard!" (rhyming)








or like, you could say something about how it will prevent being tardy or late to class...








those are bad i think but haha just throwin it out there|||I think u should give the kids a smartie candy and say something like this


Be smartie dont be late and get a tardy

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